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Myth or Reality pt1 by ~Lycanscar:iconLycanscar:



During the age of blood and steel, great armies fought for one thing and one thing only… “Power.” Territory after territory was either at a blaze or was totally eradicated from the major bloodshed. One Lord was the most fear of them all, He’s Lord Daetyron. The legend of dragon’s blood will bring power was past out and Lord Daetyron heard of the legend. He went into a crusade known as the Black Blood Crusade.

The Black Blood Crusade however failed and the lord was forced into hiding, but said this before his disappearance. “I shall return to have blood of power and set my vengeance on those who betrayed!” Humans feared that he would succeed, so they decided to get rid of the realm of magic. For a long time of history it was gone.

The year is 2005, in the dark woods of peace and quiet was disrupted by rustling of a mysterious figure running through the forest. Many sounds disrupted the forest’s peace as the one figure was chased by many others; the one was holding something in his hands. “He’s heading for the bridge!” yelled one of the figures chasing the one.

“We have him now!” said another.

“Yeah!” said the rest.

The figure that was holding the object hit the bridge, but encountered a roadblock. He then encountered the folk that were chasing him from behind. He soon backed up to the edge of the bridge. “No where for you to go now, Elf!” yelled Jophin, this bandana head with straight brown hair. His face covered with a beard and his eyes were amber gold. The Elf looked at him then he had a plan in his mind.

“Give me the object Elf!” yelled Jophin.

The Elf stepped on the edge and fell back into a drop of a great lunge into the river that rushed for miles with no end. Jophin looked over the edge as the Elf crashed into the rapids. As the Elf goes through the washing water, going through hitting the rock at the bottom of the river, he let go of the object that he was holding. They hit a fork in the rapids; the object went down the right as the Elf went down the left. Back on the bridge Jophin had an emotion burn with rage. “Ahhhhhhhhh!” he yelled. Then he turned towards his men and yelled. “Get me that object you fools!” The men hesitated when he yelled. “Well; Get moving you fools!” he yelled. The men then ran and got into their cars then took off.

In a house not to far from the bridge, a nice little house that homed two people. “Hey father. I’m going to check the net.” Said a kid of fourteen.

Ok bucko, just hurry with it.” Said an older man.

The boy went out of the house; his hair was jet black and short. His eyes resemble to silvery sapphires on his celestial-looking face. He headed towards the river and retrieved the net, which was full of fish, but was heavier then normal. The boy carried it to the shack besides the house. He set the net on a table and opened it. The fish burst out and spread as they revealed a mystery. The boy looked at the object and wondered as he went over and picked it up. “Aiden, what’s taking you?” asked his father.

“Um… Just putting the tricky fish away.” said Aiden while hid the object.

It was about midnight before he returned and revealed it again. “It… It looks like an egg.” he said quietly. Aiden grabbed the object and he got up wondering what to do with it.

Three years has passed from the event that happened. The house next to the river looked like it did before. “Aiden, you’re going to be late.” said the father.

“I know.” Said Aiden rushing out of the door and got on his bike. He took off to school. He had his hair straight and half way down his neck. He wore a black jacket with a white T-shirt underneath and jeans that was black and matched his jacket. He managed to make it on the first bell.

After school, Aiden got on his bike and took off again, but not to his house. When he went down along the street, he found a dirt path and went down till he arrived at an abandon mine that haven’t been used in years. Aiden entered the dark somewhat lighted caverns until he reached the main chamber, where the ceiling had a hole with wooden beams across the path to the top. Aiden set his backpack down near the mouth of the chamber and said. “Hey Nach; how have you been?”

A light draconic voice echoed the hallowed walls of the chamber. “Reading, like usual. You Aiden?” said Nach, this silver scaled dragon that has two large horns jutting out of his head, smooth back with two huge wings that were folded in. His eyes pure as gold with slit pupils.

“Doing well, brought you some beef.” Said Aiden as he opened his gym bag, which contained a big slab of meat in it.

“Aiden, you know I can get my own food…”

“I don’t want to hear it… I know you can, but not till night.” Aiden tried removing the slab out of his bag, Nach reached over and extracted the meat from Aiden’s grasp, Aiden continued. “Anyways, I have to go home. Have a pleasant meal and dream till tomorrow.” Nach nodded as Aiden left.

Aiden put his bike away as he arrived at his house. He entered and noticed that there was some guest. His father was on the ground beaten badly and Aiden asked in fear. “Who… who are you guys?”

Jophin looked at the kid and replied with calm. “I would worry more about yourself at the moment.” He smiled as two of his goons grabbed him and took him out back.

All were outside except for Aiden’s father. Jophin looked at a goon with sunglasses on and he pushed a button. The house was torn into a blaze of smoke and fire as pieces flew in every direction. Jophin looked at Aiden. “Now, where’s the egg that you took from me?!”

To Be Concluded.
©2008 ~Lycanscar
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Yeah, this is something I've had bugging me so I came up with a TV Series plot of Fantasy genre anyways... got a few things to say...

1. If you want you can draw my characters in your view and I'll supply you with the details if you want. There are only three main detailed characters in this scene and here they are... Aiden (age 14/17), Jophin, and Nach.
Just send a note if you want to do this, to notify me and to get my approval. and also to get the details and info about the character.

2. If you want you can draw an event that happened in this scene. Same thing, send a note if you want to do this, to notify me and to get my approval.

Anyways mates, that's all I had to say. Thank you and enjoy.

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~snowfyre:iconsnowfyre: Feb 5, 2008, 5:38:32 AM
Pretty interesting, nicely spaced into bite-sized chunks, though bit lost from reading it.


Oh and "to be continued" or "to be concluded"

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"There's a reason why the word 'Supposed' was invented"

--> Snowfyre
~Snapjaw:iconSnapjaw: Feb 5, 2008, 5:43:08 AM
yay writing loving it so far!

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Don't try to run,
Don't try to hide,
Either way it's suicide.
Surrender yourself to her jaws,
Let your flesh rip beneath her claws,
For she is the wolf,
Snapjaw...
~Lycanscar:iconLycanscar: Feb 5, 2008, 5:45:37 AM
pt 1= part one... hehe ^.^ pt 2 I'm working on right now...

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"Tiger"
"Horse"
"Wolf"
"Demon Style: Strike of the Nine"

Wolf Demon of Lightning
~Lycanscar:iconLycanscar: Feb 5, 2008, 5:45:49 AM
Thank you mate...

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"Tiger"
"Horse"
"Wolf"
"Demon Style: Strike of the Nine"

Wolf Demon of Lightning
~horriblescreenname:iconhorriblescreenname: Feb 5, 2008, 2:26:41 PM
Fun, how long do you plan on making it?

It was really good, there were a few errors I noticed like
Ok bucko, just hurry with it.” Said an older man.
needs a " at the begining too, but nothing distracted or took away from the reading.
~Chobaryu:iconChobaryu: Feb 5, 2008, 5:14:06 PM
Very nice :3 This has some interesting potential. I'd like to see where it goes :nod:

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"Though we live in trying times, we're the ones who have to try." - 'Everyday Glory'
~Lycanscar:iconLycanscar: Feb 5, 2008, 8:57:36 PM
I should of mentioned, but forgot... this is a rough draft... hehe going to go with it. Some friends and I are working on it... mostly, I'm the writer... hehe...

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"Tiger"
"Horse"
"Wolf"
"Demon Style: Strike of the Nine"

Wolf Demon of Lightning
~Lycanscar:iconLycanscar: Feb 5, 2008, 8:57:46 PM
Thank you mate...

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"Tiger"
"Horse"
"Wolf"
"Demon Style: Strike of the Nine"

Wolf Demon of Lightning
~horriblescreenname:iconhorriblescreenname: Feb 6, 2008, 5:37:11 AM
Awsome. I can never get any of my friends to collaborate a project for anything (except every once in awhile I can get a bunch of them to be in a movie, but none of them do any editting), so I'm sure thats got to be a lot of fun.